I didn't lie to you when I've said I'm different from the other girls.
I really love with much more intensity, and I need to be close all the time.
I like to scream my love with my eyes, my hands, my mouth, my body.
And I promise, you will never find anyone who loves you more than I do. Not even close. I'll always be the one that I've felt that loved you more.
But when you came to me and said ''This is it. We are over.''
Don't expect many tears from me.
I will tell you ''please don't go, I cannot be without you''
And I will give you one chance or two to come back to my arms.
But if you don't, let me tell you one dirty little secret of mine.
I will pick you your files that I have registered inside of my heart
And just delete it.
Don't expect my tears when you are just a clumsy kid.
From: the one that loves you the most













Comments
And your English actually isn't that bad. XD
I can see two things I can point out right now. In the first paragraph you wrote "I didn't lied to you". It should be "I didn't lie to you".
And in the second paragraph, you wrote "Don't expect many tears for me." From the context, I think you meant 'from me'.
But this is really great, anyway. Excellent work. ^^
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With love,
*Gir-Gir
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Fly me away,
take me away,
for your support
and for helping me with the grammar! XD
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With love,
*Gir-Gir
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Fly me away,
take me away,
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Ich schreie vor Schmerz und weiss
Dein Herz kann mich hören
Mais ma voix se cloître sous cette terre
Einsam liege ich auf deinem kalten Stein
Dark Sanctuary-Dein kalter Stein
~PwincessnaveeraKeep smiling!
thanks for the fav ^-^
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Ich schreie vor Schmerz und weiss
Dein Herz kann mich hören
Mais ma voix se cloître sous cette terre
Einsam liege ich auf deinem kalten Stein
Dark Sanctuary-Dein kalter Stein
~PwincessnaveeraKeep smiling!
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